fredag 13 januari 2012

Goldilocks Summarizer

This story is about a girl named Goldilocks. She loves to walk in the woods. One time she went to the woods again she was so tired and hungri. She saw a table with three bowls of porridge. So she went in to the house to see if there was someone home. but no one answered her. So she ate the porridge and she sat on a chair. And she broked one of them by accident. She was so tired because of her long walk in woods so she went to the bed. The bears came home and saw what Goldilocks has done. The bowl was empty and one of the chairs was broken. They went to the beds to look if someone was there. And Goldilocks was there she woke up and ran out of the house because she was so afraid and she never went to the woods.

1 kommentar:

  1. Stabilt innehåll dvs en tydlig sammanfattning av sagan. Kontrollera verben - Du byter tempus och gör en del verbfel.

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